CSI COWBOYS
Apr. 9th, 2010 04:06 pm![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png)
The body had to be days old at least. Piss, blood, rot - The air was thick with the stench of decay, making Dan's stomach churn. Wade dismounted without a pause and crouched at the corpse's side before shoving it onto its back.
Dan climbed down reluctantly, tossed the horses reins over a branch, and stood over Wade. The man'd been shot three times in the chest; any of the shots could have killed him: one in the stomach, one near the heart, one under the throat. They were big holes, like brown badges on the man's stained vest.
Dan climbed down reluctantly, tossed the horses reins over a branch, and stood over Wade. The man'd been shot three times in the chest; any of the shots could have killed him: one in the stomach, one near the heart, one under the throat. They were big holes, like brown badges on the man's stained vest.
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Date: 2010-04-13 10:43 am (UTC)Excellent details. You really know how to build atmosphere in a small frame.
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Date: 2010-05-13 03:34 pm (UTC)