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Arthas swore that she was using magic some how - he had no knowledge of the art - but when he gasped the question, Jaina just laughed and told him to do someone more productive with his mouth. But never had he had a lover like the sorceress. Her fingers drew strange symbols over his flushed skin and her lips burned as she trailed kisses down his chest. And when she took him into his mouth, Arthas saw lights dance in front of his eyes.

And then, when she allowed him entrance into her slick heat, Arthas forgot about his vows and his promises and his mission and his secrets, lost in her as she wrapped him in her spell. It was like a fire, engulfing him until he had nothing but his most primordial instincts. Jaina's laughing reached his ringing ears and he almost heard words - but unlike him, Jaina never lost herself in their passion. She stayed silent afterwards when he questioned her and revealed nothing.

Comments

[aleh.livejournal.com]

That's beautifully, silkenly, smoothly written.

I liked it. ^^;

[verdictlesslife.livejournal.com]

Thank you! I've been trying to improve my sex scenes because I'm dirty like that. XD

[kashiichan.livejournal.com]

Very nice.

And when she took him into his mouth
Should that be "him into her" mouth?

[verdictlesslife.livejournal.com]

Hehehehe yeah. I should probably beta these things before I post.

[kashiichan.livejournal.com]

Oh the implications, though. ;D

I should probably beta these things before I post.
Or you could be like me, and edit something five or six times after you click the "post entry" button. xD

[verdictlesslife.livejournal.com]

Always better to fix something than ignore it! I'm the exact opposite - once I've written something, I don't want to read it again until I've distanced myself from it. Also, I'm lazy. XP

[kashiichan.livejournal.com]

Haha. Well done. xD;