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I was organizing my journals today - tagging, titling, etc - in preparation for copying them to DW when I started re-reading the entries and their comments. [personal profile] baggyeyes, I am so grateful to have you as a friend! Your comments made me so incredibly happy. And you're an amazing author to boot! I love your Charlie so very very much. He's impossible for me to write, but you master him with such ease. <3 And Sebastian - Wow. He slides perfectly into the Yuma canon. It's hard - damn near impossible - to insert original characters into an established world, but Sebastian fits right in like he's always been there.

In conclusion! Here's a drabbly-majigger about Ben and Dan. No real point to it, I was just inspired to jolt something down about them. Hope you like it!

Title: Two Aces
Fandom: 3:10 to Yuma
Characters/Pairing: Ben, Dan
Summary: Ben and Dan gamble.
Rating: PG
A/N: A drabble for [personal profile] baggyeyes! You are continually awesome and your stories blow me away. You rock!


"I could teach you how." Wade shuffled the old deck slowly, slipping the cards back and forth in his hands. He tapped them on the table before spreading them in an arc across the wood. He grinned his slow wolf-grin. "It's easy enough; just need to be quick and smart."

"No thanks."

"So Dan Evans draws the line at cheating at cards. Somehow it seems like a lesser sin than your other pursuits, Dan."

"You're the outlaw here, Wade." Dan watched as Wade gathered them up again and split them into two piles to shuffle.

He tapped them together and made a neat pile in the center of the table, then grabbed the bottle of whiskey, refilled his glass and Dan's, which was still only half full. "Easy," he said again. "Riffle shuffle. Learned it as a boy. Go on - Lift the top cards."

Dan waited a moment before obeying. He leaned forward, flipped the top two cards: aces. "Manipulation."

The grin was back. "Useful trick when there's a good prize to be won. Sure you don't want to learn?"

"I don't gamble."

"Sure you do, Dan. Want me to list them all? Coming out west was a gamble. Buying a ranch was a gamble." Wade stretched across the table to gather the cards and then started shuffling them again, cutting the pile twice before setting the deck back down. He pressed his tongue against his teeth and tapped the cards with a callused finger. "Joining me was a gamble."

The room was hot and his throat was dry, but Dan didn't trust himself with anymore whiskey. "That's not the same-"

"Fact of the matter is that you're gambling right now."

Dan could hear the tinkling piano music from the saloon below them. "All right, Wade," he said at last, grabbing the cards to shuffle before Wade could. "What are the stakes?"

"Same as always," Wade replied as he raised his glass to his lips, "Dan."

Gamble

Date: 2009-06-06 11:09 pm (UTC)
baggyeyes: Bugs Bunny and the Bull (Dan Evans - hat)
From: [personal profile] baggyeyes
When i get back home, I'll comment more, but right now I just wanted to say what an excellent piece this is...I can *hear* Ben's growl of a voice as he counters every single one of Dan's protests. Lovely work.

Re: Gamble

Date: 2009-06-23 09:26 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] verdictlesslife.livejournal.com
Thank you! I'm glad you liked it! All your awesome comments inspired me to write something, even if it was short drabble. But! Your awesomeness deserves way more.

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