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[jaebility]

Title: Face Down
Author: verdictlesslife
Word count: 374
Characters: Ben and Dan
Summary: Buttsecks!
Warnings: ...Buttsecks!
A/N: For porn_battle at IJ.


Chest on the flat rock, face down in the sandy dirt, the rest of him burning like whiskey and fever and sin. God, he's dripping with sweat - hard and hot and hot even though the desert's a cold blue and the campfire's sputtered into grey coals. He can see about jack shit, but fuck his vision - what he can feel -

"Dan," Wade laugh-breaths into his ear, sending Dan's skin into shivers. "I like your voice, Dan. Nobody around - go ahead."

The jeans burn as they shove them down and there's rock and grit under his cheek, but that don't matter - Dan can't think beyond his cock right now. He lifts his hips as Wade pushes in, thumbs tattooing bruises onto Dan's back. He grunts and strains forward in spite of himself, but Wade bends in, his breath on Dan's throat followed by lips, teeth, tongue. He pushes again and Dan's hands scramble across the sweat-slicked stone and he gasps a burning lungful of thick air. God, it hurts and arouses and there's a spot in there somewhere that feels like heaven -

"Come on, Dan," Wade says, and then pauses to thrust and thrust and thrust, "let me hear you."

"Shut up - just shut up."

Wade rubs his chin across the back of Dan's neck and ruffles his hair with another chuckle, but he obeys for once in his goddamn life. His palms make circles on Dan's heaving sides before Wade reaches around to cover Dan's cock with his hand. It's rough and callused and does he know how damn good that feels? His fingers smear sticky wetness over the head of it and Dan clamps his mouth shut against the pleasure because like hell is he going to give Wade any satisfaction -

When Wade comes, his fist clenches tight around Dan's cock and he shoves hard, crushing Dan against the stone. He murmurs something, but the scraping rock and the dry dust and the fire glow and the slide of skin on skin and the spilling warmth make it impossible to think or do anything other than come, too, with a grunt and pleasure-closed eyes.

It'll hurt like hell to ride, but the completeness he feels now is worth tomorrow's pain.

Comments

[sasha-anu.livejournal.com]

Oh...this was lovely.

I love the imagery in this and the power play between the boys.

[melime-everwood.livejournal.com]

wowww! this is soo good:)
yeah Ben/Dan!

[baggyeyes]

This is a raw piece. Raw, says I.

Man, Bridal Suite looks dead dead dead.

I commented there, but I think I might be the only one.

Just so you know, I love anything Ben/Dan you write. So, more please. :)

Maybe Dan could get the uh, upper hand next time. You know what I mean. Make CB the man for once.

[waca-waca.livejournal.com]

Geez, every time I get to read one of your Ben/Dans it just makes my day.

Please, don't ever get tired of them.

It'll hurt like hell to ride
8DDD Couldn't stop laughing at this!

[astarte59.livejournal.com]

Marvelous! As someone chronically unable to write anything short myself, I can only admire how much you convey in a short space. And your use of language is what does it--pure poetry: "burning like whiskey and fever and sin," "Wade laugh-breaths into his ear," "thumbs tattooing bruises onto Dan's back," "the scraping rock and the dry dust and the fire glow and the slide of skin on skin and the spilling warmth." And the last sentence is lovely. You pack so much into your words that you don't waste them. I love the power dynamics--"like hell is he going to give Wade any satisfaction"--Dan has to maintain that modicum of control, even as he's losing control to Wade every other way. Beautiful. And the story as a result *fanning myself* hot.

[farfums.livejournal.com]

Ho wow, my head's spinning. Beautiful, beautiful imagery.

..The last line cracked me up something fierce XD Never really thought about horseback riding after something like this.

Of course, I've gotta agree with baggyeyes on making Ben topsies someday~ I'd love to read that in your style ^__~

[baggyeyes]

Verdictlesslife or yaeforjae (did I get that right? I always get letters backwards)

Did you see Trouble in the Henhouse? It was inspired by one of the prompts, but I didn't know if I might have offended you. I figured it was one of your prompts.

If it did, I'll type an apology straight away.

[glassneko.livejournal.com]

Mmm. Loved this!

[verdictlesslife.livejournal.com]

Thank you!

[verdictlesslife.livejournal.com]

Thanks!

[verdictlesslife.livejournal.com]

Yeah, I wish Bridal Suite saw more action. If only the fandom were bigger...

Anyway, I'm glad you liked it! I actually have a rough draft of a Dan-topping story; once I get some more free time, I'll finish it up and post it.

[verdictlesslife.livejournal.com]

Thank you! I really glad you liked it! Every time I get to read a comment like yours it makes my day. :D

[verdictlesslife.livejournal.com]

Thank you!

[verdictlesslife.livejournal.com]

Wow - Thank you so much! I put a lot of effort into my writing, so it makes me so happy when someone likes what I've popped out. I really, really appreciate the feedback.

Thanks again! Glad you liked it!

[bionic.livejournal.com]

That was hot and lovely.

[verdictlesslife.livejournal.com]

Thank you!

[verdictlesslife.livejournal.com]

A (very belated) thank you! I'm glad you liked it!